My snippet this week comes from For the Long Run. Jay blinked up at him, head cocked to one side. “N-no, I’m not, but I didn’t think you’d want the job now. You’re not obligated.” There was no way Eric was letting this opportunity slip away. A lot more was going on with this young man, and he wanted to know what. Mostly, Eric wasn’t one to take a second chance for granted. Selfishly, he wanted Jay, and not simply for one night. No one had ever gotten under his skin so quickly and completely. “No, I’m not obligated. What I am, however, is intrigued. You need a head of security that has real murder and crime scene experience.” Eric thumped his chest with his free hand. “Moi. Besides, there is a lot to be said for fate and bad date-night movie plots.” Read more snippets at the Rainbow Snippets Facebook group.
6/6/2021 06:31:52 am
A great snippet, it really draws the reader in.
Elizabeth Noble
6/6/2021 08:02:17 am
Thank you! 6/6/2021 12:13:28 pm
I’m intrigued to know why Jay needs a head of security with murder crime scene experience. ❤️ 6/7/2021 12:35:31 am
Needing a a head of security I understand. One that has real murder and crime scene experience? That raises a lot of questions.
Sadie
6/8/2021 07:02:26 pm
Oh, good hook! I definitely want to read more! Comments are closed.
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