This little bit is from my WIP that is actually finished and awaiting a contract decision.
The book is The Long Con and one of the MCs, Mal, is having a serious discussion with himself!
For perhaps the first time in his life, Mal was a bundle of indecision.
One half of his brain kept screaming twenty-four and employee. The other half shouted equally as loudly real friend and mutual attraction. He’d been able to spot fake friends after Mal’s first few missteps and what was growing between he and Colt was true affection.
Was he using Colt’s age and the fact he worked as Mal’s public persona as an excuse?
He was alone in his suite, preparing for the next trip. Looking at his reflection in his mirror he muttered, “Be honest, Mal Kensington, yes, you are making excuses.”
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1/21/2017 10:52:34 pm
Wow! The conflict in his head is so gripping...I could almost hear those two voices shouting in my own head!
1/22/2017 08:16:59 am
1/21/2017 11:48:10 pm
Nice bit of introspection.
1/22/2017 08:17:24 am
1/22/2017 01:41:34 pm
I hate it when I lose an argument with myself...
1/22/2017 02:06:55 pm
We're so good at making excuses. Most of the time they're bullshit and this definitely seems like one of them. Got on, Mal, Ignore all the voices in your head and just go with your heart :D
1/28/2017 11:19:34 am
I like the introspection in this snippet.
2/1/2017 04:03:59 pm
Makes me wonder why he feels he has to make excuses if the attraction is mutual.
2/5/2017 11:06:15 am
Thank you for reading! Mal does finally stop making excuses and gives in.
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